I know it's a little outdated because I wrote it during the summer 2013 when the incident happened but I never got the chance to upload it.
Prompt: Read your local newspaper for several days, collecting articles about a
controversial subject that interests you. Using information from the articles take a position
on the issue, and write an essay supporting it. Be sure to document all material you borrow
from your sources.
Chaos in Egypt
By Katy Zou
A country that does not seek to separate its religious
and military interests from its political aspirations will surely find itself
in failure and chaos. The American constitution has shown that separation of
religion and political party militaries places order in the governmental
structure, ensuring well representation and fair representation for the people.
The ongoing power changes and violence brewing in Egypt resulted in strong
adherence of politics to the Islam faith and the militarist self-interests
meddling with politics. As hard as Egypt struggles to convert herself to a
democracy, this cannot be done if certain aspects of interference continue to
influence government politics. The Egyptian military, in order to restore
order, should not interfere with politics to support their own self-interests
or harm peaceful protesters.
The Nasr City protesting event is a prime example of unregulated
control of the military. Peaceful protestors in Cairo were massacred like herds
of animals when the plan was originally to disperse them peacefully and
guarantee safe passage. The specific death toll is uncertain but about more
than 400 lay dead and thousands wounded. Doctors, family members, and people
attempting to help the injured were shot with snipers and rifles as well. The
lack of enforcement power and failure to carry out the actions promised by
leaders of the military resulted in the death of hundreds and furthermore
muddled the complications in Egypt.
The peaceful protestors who stood ground in Nasr City
had every democratic right to be there. Egypt is not a democracy. However,
Egypt should realize that democracy or not, violence should not be enacted on
peaceful protesting; it can erupt in civil disorder. With the ever-increasing
complications of the Egyptian political affairs, unnecessary violence increases
as well. The question of whether the military or the protestors opened fire
first but either way, the peaceful should not have been killed. It is the duty
of the police to protect the people, not kill them. It is the duty of the
police to protect the rights of the people, not strip them away. The police
force, or military, should stay out of the political sphere of influence,
keeping it one sole job as to protect its citizens.
Egypt is in a current disorder of unpredictable chaos
and violence. The protectors of the people are killing the people and
interfering in politics, greedy for power. In this time of violence and
discontent, the best solution would be to protect the opinion of the masses,
the opinion of the people. In order to restore the peace, the military must
consume itself to protecting the people and remain neutral in politics.
Sources
1.
Coker, Margaret.
"Egyptians Brace for More Bloodshed." Wall Street Journal 16
008 2013, A1. Print.
also on webpage:
http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424127887324139404579014371839426440.html
2. Entous, Adam, Carol E. Lee, and Julian E. Barnes.
"U.S. Treads Lightly as Crisis Deepens." Wall
Street Journal 16 008 2013, A1 &A7. Print.
Also on webpage: http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424127887323455104579015171553352730.html?mod=WSJ_hpp_LEFTTopStories
3.
Abi-Habib, Maria.
"Vicious Backlash Shakes One Egyptian Town." Wall Street Journal
16 008 2013, A6. Print.
Also on webpage: http://online.wsj.com/article/SB10001424127887324139404579015061439067186.html?mod=WSJ_hpp_LEFTTopStories
4. "America's Interests in Egypt." Wall
Street Journal 16 008 2013, A12. Print.
Also on webpage:
5.
"The
storm before the storm." (2013): n. page. Web. 19 Aug. 2013.
<http://www.economist.com/news/briefing/21583718-bloody-confrontation-streets-cairo-damaging-development-and-could-be>.
6.
Mohamed, Feisal G.
"Egypt in Crisis: Ten Observations." Dissent. (2013): n. page. Web.
19 Aug. 2013.
<http://www.dissentmagazine.org/blog/egypt-in-crisis-ten-observations>.
7.
Trew, Bel. "They
Struck Us Down Like Animals." Foreign Policy. n. page. Web. 21 Aug. 2013.
<http://www.foreignpolicy.com/articles/2013/08/14/they_struck_us_down_like_animals_muslim_brotherhood_violence_egypt?page=0,1>.
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